Monday, November 24, 2008

Chapter 23- Forged by Fire

Gerald walked in and found out that the apartment was on fire. He looked for Angel and saw Jordan walking slowly to the foot of the bed to where Angel was. Gerald yelled at Jordan, and Jordan leaped toward him. They began to fight, and Gerald got pretty badly hurt. Yet, Gerald was able to take Jordan's legs out from under him and make him fall. Jordan was stunned for a bit, but then realized the fire and escaped. Gerald picked up Angel and tried to get out of the apartment through the commotion of the fire. Gerald tripped over a black mass in the doorway, but was able to breath the fresher air that was close to the ground. Then, he slinked down the first flight of steps and ended on a landing. Gerald then heard the noise of boots, and the noise of his mother looking for her children.

This chapter was very intense, and it made me very excited to read the next and last chapter. I'm anticipating to find out what happens to all the characters, including the terrible Jordan. This chapter was deeply compelling, and added suspense to what would happen next.

1 comment:

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